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RyderBPD
RyderBPD
Lookin' Good!
Oct 15 2009, 8:36 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 15 2009, 8:36 PM EDT
Nice beginning to the story! You definitely set up an interesting crime. Poor Flack in the midst of his grief.

I like that you're using Peyton's character in your work. . .because love her or hate her, her presence forces Mac to think about how much he cares for Stella! :)
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JeffreyCoffman
JeffreyCoffman
1. RE: Lookin' Good!
Oct 18 2009, 1:24 AM EDT | Post edited: Oct 18 2009, 1:24 AM EDT
"Nice beginning to the story! You definitely set up an interesting crime. Poor Flack in the midst of his grief.

I like that you're using Peyton's character in your work. . .because love her or hate her, her presence forces Mac to think about how much he cares for Stella! :)"
Flack will be okay. You are right about Mac and Stella. They need to do something with them. Even if it is defining their relationship.
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NewYorkLove010
NewYorkLove010
2. RE: Lookin' Good!
Oct 19 2009, 7:44 PM EDT | Post edited: Oct 19 2009, 7:44 PM EDT
"Nice beginning to the story! You definitely set up an interesting crime. Poor Flack in the midst of his grief.

I like that you're using Peyton's character in your work. . .because love her or hate her, her presence forces Mac to think about how much he cares for Stella! :)"
Thanks! It's the first thing I've ever writen so the whole thing is very new to me!
Your so right about Peyton! I personaly liked her but your right, her being around makes him think.
Thanks again! I'm writing more as we speak so hopefuly I'll have the rest up soon!
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WickedB
WickedB
3. RE: Lookin' Good!
Nov 22 2009, 2:51 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 22 2009, 2:51 PM EST
please write more!!!!
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NewYorkLove010
NewYorkLove010
4. RE: Lookin' Good!
Nov 22 2009, 3:22 PM EST | Post edited: Nov 22 2009, 3:22 PM EST
Thanks guys!

I've started writing other stories (Sweet Sanctity and Hey There Delilah) but I've wanted to start this again :) More Coming!!
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