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RyderBPD |
Lookin' Good!
Oct 15 2009, 8:36 PM EDT
Nice beginning to the story! You definitely set up an interesting crime. Poor Flack in the midst of his grief.I like that you're using Peyton's character in your work. . .because love her or hate her, her presence forces Mac to think about how much he cares for Stella! :) Do you find this valuable?
Keyword tags:
CSI: New York
Fan-Fic
Smacked
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JeffreyCoffman |
1. RE: Lookin' Good!
Oct 18 2009, 1:24 AM EDT
"Nice beginning to the story! You definitely set up an interesting crime. Poor Flack in the midst of his grief.Flack will be okay. You are right about Mac and Stella. They need to do something with them. Even if it is defining their relationship. Do you find this valuable? |
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NewYorkLove010 |
2. RE: Lookin' Good!
Oct 19 2009, 7:44 PM EDT
"Nice beginning to the story! You definitely set up an interesting crime. Poor Flack in the midst of his grief.Thanks! It's the first thing I've ever writen so the whole thing is very new to me! Your so right about Peyton! I personaly liked her but your right, her being around makes him think. Thanks again! I'm writing more as we speak so hopefuly I'll have the rest up soon! Do you find this valuable? |
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NewYorkLove010 |
4. RE: Lookin' Good!
Nov 22 2009, 3:22 PM EST
Thanks guys!I've started writing other stories (Sweet Sanctity and Hey There Delilah) but I've wanted to start this again :) More Coming!! Do you find this valuable? |