Location: Lost in moments, Part 2

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Mizuhara
WOW!
Jan 4 2008, 10:47 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 4 2008, 10:47 PM EST
this is a really good story...although it's kinda funny that you used similar languages for both relationships..."inhale his/her scent" and "'who says it has to end etc" but don't take it wrong...THE STORY IS FREAKING AWESOME!!!
Linds and Danny are good match...be supportive of it ever since "Zoo York" when Danny gave Linds the wrong advice...
and Flack and Stella....that is the best match possible....Stel needs someone in her life that is not gotta harm her (Drew Bedford, Frankie)....Flack will be a good partner for her....
hehe..love your story...but the o nly thing is...Sheldon and Mac are left alone...well...Sheldon is alone...but Mac is just part from Peyton...
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NYgirl
NYgirl
1. RE: WOW!
Apr 7 2009, 3:47 PM EDT | Post edited: Apr 7 2009, 3:47 PM EDT
so, i know its been a while, but i was thinking about continuing on with the story, maybe matching others up, what do you think. Sometimes i think my writing really sucks. Do you find this valuable?    

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