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Trouble in Paradise
Christi woke up with bright lights in her eyes. She looked around and saw David and Danny tied up together. She looked at herself and saw that she had a bandana covering her mouth. She closed her eyes and thought back to what happened.
Danny decided to take the kids camping. It was a present for passing. Christi remembered falling asleep in her tent with her sister and mother. She looked around. She didn't see them. She managed to slide the bandana down.
"Dad where's mom and Lucy?" He started to mumble through his bandana. Christi sighed. She slipped out of her ropes and walked over and pushed the bandana down. "I'm not sure." Christi thought some more. Where were they? She walked over to a window and looked out it. Christi saw people running around and kids screaming.
She knew by that that they were in the basement of a school. She heard a door open and Christi grabbed a lead pipe. She saw two guys walk in. "Christiana." She focused on the one guy. "Billy." "How did you get out of your ropes?" "Oh come on! A monkey can get out of those pathetic things you call knots."
Billy got mad and tackled Christi. Christi kicked him off and then pinned him down and put the bar to his neck. "Where's my mother and sister?" She said through clenched teeth. She heard heavy footsteps behind her. She waited for the right tie to attack. The guy was about to hit her in the head with something . "Christi!" Danny yelled. "Got it!" She said swinging around and hitting the guy with the pipe.
The guy fell down in pain. Christi put he bar back on Billy's neck. "Where's my mother and sister?!?" Billy threw a punch and it hit her in the eye."Hit him!" David screamed at his siter. "Will you stay out of it?" She punched Billy in the face. Billy pulled out a gun. Christi stopped. She found herself powerless.
He put it to her head and dragged her out to the car. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Danny watched as a single tear fell down from Christi's cheek and landed on the floor. Christi was praying that she and her family would make it out ok.
Christi was thrown down. She picked her head up and saw her mother and sister handcuffed to pipes. Christi was really worried about her sister because she was nine months pregnant and due any day. Christi had to think of how to get her sister out of there alive. Christi was going to fight her way out. She had to. She was going to make sure that all three guys were going to deal with her so that her family could escape.
Christi waited for the guys to leave and then she snuck over to where they kept her mom's gun. She grabbed it and waited for the guy to walk in. She hit him in the head and hand cuffed him to the pipes. The other guy came in and Christi saw that he had a gun. She drew hers. "You won't make it out of here. "You're just a kid!" Christi put her gun away and ran after the guy. They fought over his gun and it accidently went off.
Christi got up and saw the man lying on the floor bleeding. "Quick I need your cellphone Luce." "It's in my bra." "There is no way I am fishing down your bra for your cellphone. Mom where's yours?" "Pocket." Christi walked over and garbbed it. She dialed the first number that came to mind. "Uncle Mac. Danny and David are tied up in the basement of the school builiding by Flack's. We're fine. I can handle us."
Christi had to wait for Billy. She waited by her mom. Billy walked in and saw both guys had been taken down. "Well well well. I never thought you'd do it." "Well you underestimated me." Billy pointed his gun and Christi pointed hers. "Nice." "Let's say you and I settle this the old fashion way. No guns." Billy nodded and let it go. Christi threw hers to the side. "Why are you doing this Billy?"
"Beacuse." "Well that answers everything!" Christi said rolling her eyes. Billy tried to tacke her and they started to fight. Christi punched him in both eyes. one was completely swollen shut the other was only shut partially. Billy charged at Christi and started to pound on her. Christi tried to throw him off of her but he was really pounding her.
Christi was trying to reach her gun but couldn't. Instead she kicked Billy off and pulled him up. She turned around and kicked him. He fell towards the wall and all of a sudden he got quiet. Christi watched as he fell to the ground. She looked over at the wall and saw that she had kicked him into a broken plank of wood.
Christi looked over at her sister and saw she was ok and smiled. "Christi!" Lindsay shrieked. Christi looked down and saw she was bleeding. She heard car doors. She turned and looked with her one eye that wasn't swollen shut and saw feet. "Christi? Lindsay? Lucy?" "Down here!" Christi yelled. She tried to walk but fell. She saw her father, brother, and Mac run down with guns drawn. David uncuffed Lindsay and Lucy. Danny took the one man that was handcuffed and sent him to the station.
Christi was lying on her side. Mac rolled her over so she was on her back and he could see what was wrong. He was looking and couldn't see anything. Christi moved her hands and showed a slice in her side. Mac put his hand over it and tried to stop the bleeding. Christi started to zone out. "Chris. Chris!" She tried to keep her eyes open but couldn't. The last thing she saw was Mac tapping her on the face telling her to stay with him.
Christi woke up in the hospital. She was listening to her sister screaming. The nurses and doctors were telling her to push but she was screaming it hurt to much. Christi was tired of her sister whinning. "Lucy!" "What?" "Do you want this baby?" "Yes!" "Then stop whinning and push." "It hurts too much!" "SHUT UP AND PUSH!!!" Lucy followed her sister's orders and within minutes she heard a baby cry.
Christi stood up and walked over to her sister. She smiled at her little niece. "What do you want to name her?" Christi asked. "I only picked out a first name." "What did you pick?" "Olivia." "Well what about a middle name?" "You pick." Christi thought a bit. "Brooke." She turned to the nurse. "Sarah can you get me a drink?" Sarah nodded and left. Lucy just smiled at her daughter. "Welcome to the world Olivia Brooke Messer." She said smiling at her daughter. Christi just watched as her little niece slept.
Everyone came in and congratulated Lucy. Christi wasn't really paying attention. She was fixing her sister's hair. Christi stuck her head out and smiled at her Uncle Mac. "Thanks for saving me." She said smiling at them. She loved her very confusing family. She got up and walked over and sat on her Uncle's lap. She gave him a hug and just sat there. "Hey what about me?" Danny said. "Sorry daddy don't get jealous." She said getting up and walking over to him. She sat down on his lap and set her head gently on his shoulder. "I'm glad everyone's ok."
Christi was watching her niece sleeping and started to get tired. "So what did you name her?" Lindsay asked curiously. "Olivia Brooke Messer." She said smiling. "Can I hold her?" Lucy nodded. Lindsay walked over and picked her granddaughter up. Everyone was talking and having a great time. When the nurse came in everyone grew sad. Danny picked Christi up gently and set her back down in her bed. He put the blankets over her and gaver her a kiss on the forehead. "Goodnight Kiddo."
He walked over and gave Lucy and gave her a hug and kiss on the cheek. Lucy waited for the nurse to take Olivia back to the nursery. Once she was gone she decided to lay back and close her eyes. What a crazy day! She began to think. Talk about your trouble in paradise. But everything was nice now. She had a healthy baby and her family was fine and she wouldn't trade that for the world.
Danny decided to take the kids camping. It was a present for passing. Christi remembered falling asleep in her tent with her sister and mother. She looked around. She didn't see them. She managed to slide the bandana down.
"Dad where's mom and Lucy?" He started to mumble through his bandana. Christi sighed. She slipped out of her ropes and walked over and pushed the bandana down. "I'm not sure." Christi thought some more. Where were they? She walked over to a window and looked out it. Christi saw people running around and kids screaming.
She knew by that that they were in the basement of a school. She heard a door open and Christi grabbed a lead pipe. She saw two guys walk in. "Christiana." She focused on the one guy. "Billy." "How did you get out of your ropes?" "Oh come on! A monkey can get out of those pathetic things you call knots."
Billy got mad and tackled Christi. Christi kicked him off and then pinned him down and put the bar to his neck. "Where's my mother and sister?" She said through clenched teeth. She heard heavy footsteps behind her. She waited for the right tie to attack. The guy was about to hit her in the head with something . "Christi!" Danny yelled. "Got it!" She said swinging around and hitting the guy with the pipe.
The guy fell down in pain. Christi put he bar back on Billy's neck. "Where's my mother and sister?!?" Billy threw a punch and it hit her in the eye."Hit him!" David screamed at his siter. "Will you stay out of it?" She punched Billy in the face. Billy pulled out a gun. Christi stopped. She found herself powerless.
He put it to her head and dragged her out to the car. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Danny watched as a single tear fell down from Christi's cheek and landed on the floor. Christi was praying that she and her family would make it out ok.
Christi was thrown down. She picked her head up and saw her mother and sister handcuffed to pipes. Christi was really worried about her sister because she was nine months pregnant and due any day. Christi had to think of how to get her sister out of there alive. Christi was going to fight her way out. She had to. She was going to make sure that all three guys were going to deal with her so that her family could escape.
Christi waited for the guys to leave and then she snuck over to where they kept her mom's gun. She grabbed it and waited for the guy to walk in. She hit him in the head and hand cuffed him to the pipes. The other guy came in and Christi saw that he had a gun. She drew hers. "You won't make it out of here. "You're just a kid!" Christi put her gun away and ran after the guy. They fought over his gun and it accidently went off.
Christi got up and saw the man lying on the floor bleeding. "Quick I need your cellphone Luce." "It's in my bra." "There is no way I am fishing down your bra for your cellphone. Mom where's yours?" "Pocket." Christi walked over and garbbed it. She dialed the first number that came to mind. "Uncle Mac. Danny and David are tied up in the basement of the school builiding by Flack's. We're fine. I can handle us."
Christi had to wait for Billy. She waited by her mom. Billy walked in and saw both guys had been taken down. "Well well well. I never thought you'd do it." "Well you underestimated me." Billy pointed his gun and Christi pointed hers. "Nice." "Let's say you and I settle this the old fashion way. No guns." Billy nodded and let it go. Christi threw hers to the side. "Why are you doing this Billy?"
"Beacuse." "Well that answers everything!" Christi said rolling her eyes. Billy tried to tacke her and they started to fight. Christi punched him in both eyes. one was completely swollen shut the other was only shut partially. Billy charged at Christi and started to pound on her. Christi tried to throw him off of her but he was really pounding her.
Christi was trying to reach her gun but couldn't. Instead she kicked Billy off and pulled him up. She turned around and kicked him. He fell towards the wall and all of a sudden he got quiet. Christi watched as he fell to the ground. She looked over at the wall and saw that she had kicked him into a broken plank of wood.
Christi looked over at her sister and saw she was ok and smiled. "Christi!" Lindsay shrieked. Christi looked down and saw she was bleeding. She heard car doors. She turned and looked with her one eye that wasn't swollen shut and saw feet. "Christi? Lindsay? Lucy?" "Down here!" Christi yelled. She tried to walk but fell. She saw her father, brother, and Mac run down with guns drawn. David uncuffed Lindsay and Lucy. Danny took the one man that was handcuffed and sent him to the station.
Christi was lying on her side. Mac rolled her over so she was on her back and he could see what was wrong. He was looking and couldn't see anything. Christi moved her hands and showed a slice in her side. Mac put his hand over it and tried to stop the bleeding. Christi started to zone out. "Chris. Chris!" She tried to keep her eyes open but couldn't. The last thing she saw was Mac tapping her on the face telling her to stay with him.
Christi woke up in the hospital. She was listening to her sister screaming. The nurses and doctors were telling her to push but she was screaming it hurt to much. Christi was tired of her sister whinning. "Lucy!" "What?" "Do you want this baby?" "Yes!" "Then stop whinning and push." "It hurts too much!" "SHUT UP AND PUSH!!!" Lucy followed her sister's orders and within minutes she heard a baby cry.
Christi stood up and walked over to her sister. She smiled at her little niece. "What do you want to name her?" Christi asked. "I only picked out a first name." "What did you pick?" "Olivia." "Well what about a middle name?" "You pick." Christi thought a bit. "Brooke." She turned to the nurse. "Sarah can you get me a drink?" Sarah nodded and left. Lucy just smiled at her daughter. "Welcome to the world Olivia Brooke Messer." She said smiling at her daughter. Christi just watched as her little niece slept.
Everyone came in and congratulated Lucy. Christi wasn't really paying attention. She was fixing her sister's hair. Christi stuck her head out and smiled at her Uncle Mac. "Thanks for saving me." She said smiling at them. She loved her very confusing family. She got up and walked over and sat on her Uncle's lap. She gave him a hug and just sat there. "Hey what about me?" Danny said. "Sorry daddy don't get jealous." She said getting up and walking over to him. She sat down on his lap and set her head gently on his shoulder. "I'm glad everyone's ok."
Christi was watching her niece sleeping and started to get tired. "So what did you name her?" Lindsay asked curiously. "Olivia Brooke Messer." She said smiling. "Can I hold her?" Lucy nodded. Lindsay walked over and picked her granddaughter up. Everyone was talking and having a great time. When the nurse came in everyone grew sad. Danny picked Christi up gently and set her back down in her bed. He put the blankets over her and gaver her a kiss on the forehead. "Goodnight Kiddo."
He walked over and gave Lucy and gave her a hug and kiss on the cheek. Lucy waited for the nurse to take Olivia back to the nursery. Once she was gone she decided to lay back and close her eyes. What a crazy day! She began to think. Talk about your trouble in paradise. But everything was nice now. She had a healthy baby and her family was fine and she wouldn't trade that for the world.
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