The Higher You Fly The Harder You Fall
Okay so I wrote this while watching NCIS: LA lol so it's pretty much completely out of boredom.
Short story about Flack and Angel and Stella and Mac. I will upload more when I write it.
Music played in the back ground of apartment 504, Jason Mraz I believe. Dt. Don Flack danced around the room awkwardly in his boxers, much to the delight of his girlfriend Dt. Jessica Angel. She laughed wildly in disbelief that her bet to the detective actually worked. Suddenly it all stopped. Flack was back at a crime scene where a young man was shot to death. He quickly realized he was day dreaming about the wonderful memories he has of his now late girlfriend Dt. Jessica Angel. Even though it was months ago Jess had been shot he was still as sad as possible. The only thing that seemed to help Flack in his recovery was work. He had dove so fare into his work that he could barely see out the top, and he liked it that way. And yet again Flack was day dreaming about Jess and not listening to Dt. Mac Taylor telling him what he thinks about the crime scene. "Flack? Flack? Go home. Get some sleep." Mac asked the drifty detective. "No Mac I'm okay. I just can't seem to get my mind to turn off." Flack replied. "Well then let's get that mind working on something useful," Dt. Stella Bonesara said while walking up to the crime scene carrying her forensics kit "Whose our vic?". Flack went on to tell that the victim was Robert Coolich from Queens. He had taken two shots to the chest and that is what doctor Hawks thought was the cause of death.
Back at the lab Mac and Stella where walking to the office of the medical examiner. Hey Mac," Stella said running to catch up with him "You know I was thinking..and we never really got to finish what we started Thursday night." she said with a flirty attitude.
"Hmm, seems your right. What do you suggest we get around the inevitable call out?" Mac replied.
"You know for a CSI your not very smart Mac," Stella said jokingly, she reached over and grabbed Mac's cell phone off of his hip holster and turned it off "Whala!".
The two walked into the medical examiners office laughing, then suddenly stopped.
"Peyton!" Stell said with utter surprise.
Peyton walked up and hugged Stella. And said with a huge smile on her face said, "Mac, Stella! It's so nice to see you!"
Mac just stood there real uncomfortable like as Stella asked why she was there. Doctor Sid Hammerback pipped in to explain that Peyton was going to come down in three weeks to help out on a case that had just been switched over to the NYPD that was originally a London case, but Sid needed a little extra help at the lab so he asked her to come in early.
"Well I have a whole bunch of papers to fill out and what not but I'll catch up with you later." Peyton said then hugged Stella again and gave Mac a kiss on the check and said to him, "It's really nice to see you Mac." and walked away. Stella gave Mac a funny look and turned to Sid and asked, "Okay Sid whatcha got for me?"
"Some quite surprising things actually." Sid replied.
"Like what?" Mac asked.
"Your COD."
"It wasn't a gun shot?" Stella asked with a confused look on her face.
"No it was not. It seems your perp shot up a dead body. Your COD was in fact cardiac arrest."
"A heart attach?" Mac asked suspiciously.
"Yes. And your vic died before your perp shot him." Sid replied.
"Okay, so who shoots a dead body?" Stella asked.
"Your perp apparently." Sid said.
"Yeah. Thanks Sid." Mac said as Sid walked away.
Stella leaned into Mac and whispered, "We need to talk."
-To Be Continued-
Thanks! More to come!! :)
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Nice beginning to the story! You definitely set up an interesting crime. Poor Flack in the midst of his grief.
I like that you're using Peyton's character in your work. . .because love her or hate her, her presence forces Mac to think about how much he cares for Stella! :)
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Nov 22 2009, 3:22 PM EST
Thanks guys!
I've started writing other stories (Sweet Sanctity and Hey There Delilah) but I've wanted to start this again :) More Coming!!
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