The CSI:NY Team.
CSI:NY Team:
Setting: 1st Scene; in the lab's.
scene 1 cast: Mac, Stella, Lindsay, Adam.
Scene 1:
Stella you have got to take your job seriously, i cant have you creeping off the case to go and do your own thing. Yeah, but Mac i had too, Frankie was in my apartment...what was i supposed to do? Stella, you cant let your life distract you while your at work. Focus Stella, ts your job at risk. Yeah but, Mac, i...
(adam comes into Mac's office)
Do you want me Adam, Knock it would be nice.
Oh sorry Mac, did i interrupt something, i'l just go...
No Adam, says Stella. I was just leaving. (goes storming out)
This better be important Adam, come one quickly i got work to be getting on with, you got 1 minute,what is it?
I just got a call through, about a case in Manhattan, a murder of 23 year old Jane Artin. Danny and Lindsay are down there now investigatin the case.
Nice one Adam, lets go.
So Lindsay, your pregnant and all that but you dont seem to speak to me much and after all im the ftather of this little bundle of joy. Well Danny what is there to say? i dont kno linds i just feel that your hiding sometjing from me, is there something your not elling me? Danny you know me there is nothing that i havent, nd woundent tell you. ok linz. Danny just stop it now, Mac will be here any moment now so we better get on with this case.
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Apr 15 2009, 9:56 AM EDT by
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a great idea for a fic but you need to set out your structur properly. eg having the dialogue on different lines for different people. it is still hard for me to do so don't worry, it comes with practise. great job though
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